Swearing language: strong including religious swear words, but not often used. Kindle count story length: 4,246 (450 KB) 228 pages. characters, except for a tiny part of the story involving Travis. For readers crave such actions and yawn when your characters are meek, innocent, forgiving, and peaceable.” This book is mostly about peaceable etc. One of his ten commandments is: “Your characters should steal, kill, dishonor their parents, bear false witness, and covet their neighbor’s house, wife, man servant, maid servant, and ox. I’m reminded of Sol Stein’s advice to writers. I wanted more about Travis and that world. I liked the look in his eyes before fighting, the pummeling he gave and took, and his bringing in a beat-up buddy who was attacked by a gang outside the fight club. Gabe and Allison spend quality time with her mother. His main problem is trying to make the family farm more profitable, but his abusive and cruel dad causes problems. The story lines include: Gabe and Allison pretend to be engaged. It was easy to put down.Įven the sex scenes didn’t grab me.
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